111 Ritual

Techincally sound ...but a potrait shot could've worked better, getting rid of the third of the pic on the left and opening it more on the top and bottom.

Oh, I digs the treatment. :)

I see what Tabiso is saying, but I get the feeling that the photographer wants to be up close and personal with "Ritual". I wonder why you chose not to have the full word in focus.

I do kind of feel like the shallow DOF makes the graph a little "out of balance"? mostly because there is hardly any detail in the out of focus areas.

So my unasked for recommendation would be same framing, smaller aperture - just enough to give the guy on the left some recognisable features.

Nice shot though. I like the look. And the way the ritual points to the bokeh ball!

Shot works exactly as is, love it.